Generally, we got a bigger spread across the board for this assignment. Now, only two major weaknesses in most of your work that keeping you from getting the next level.
1. Monumentality = Clarity.
Balanced Detail to Monument - Detail complements the massing and does not detract from the 10 prisms.
Arbitary Detailing (Monumentality not clear) - Detail complements varies considerably, detracts clarity from the brief, monument 1, 2 are not clear.
Detailing consumes the massing and the brief.
2. The brief is important! - landform, two distinct entrances from the landform to the architecture, and connecting two distinct paths into meeting place. Meeting place to be "on ground"
Two distinct paths, but is meeting place on ground?
only one entry?
Only one architecture student at a time please.
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